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It's the MarySue Litmus Test! I decided to do it on several characters from The Goldenlea and Basecraft Cirrostratus.
The Goldenlea
Duke Faol Carrick: 18 (a non-sue; a rather unremarkable character in most respects)
Captain (Sir) Balthasar Viverra: 18 (a non-sue; intelligent and valiant, but also well-restrained)
Sylvia Nightcry: 24 (borderline sue; mostly she got unfairly high scores for being both a female outlaw and a main character's love interest).
All in all, these scores are probably significantly higher in part because it is, after all, a low-fantasy epic.
Basecraft Cirrostratus
Prof. Elor Kaya: 9 (an anti-sue; he's a rather hapless, clueless character who just gets dragged in too deep).
Vinz Nivariya: 4 (total anti-sue. He's generally not directly involved in the action of the story until the very end).
Y'Lazde Laz Malek: 12 (a non-sue. Laz scores slightly higher because he's probably the most attractive character in the story, and a love interest).
Lt. Bram Malga: 12 (a non-sue, scoring above 10 for plot-related reasons).









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